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Wake Up (Free verse) by unouluvme Wake up
Sprint to burial grounds
Pool around you let it be water
Cards have spoken
Donât wait walls will advance
Worlds will shrink ears will give way
Cling to a cliché
Kiss the poison as the antidote
Speak expectations to listen
Let fragrance engulf you
Did you sleep?
Up the ladder:
Death's Invitation
Down the ladder:
The Game of Categories
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Posted: July 27, 2004 11:29 AM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2004 11:29 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8586 Comments:
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unouluvme @ 4.142.234.205
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27-Jul-04/11:29 AM
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doesnt make sense? i didnt think so.
Wish I knew what your are talking about. It sounds like it might be interseting.
It seems to mean something to me, if I read it thusly,
Wake up Sprint to burial grounds Pool around you let it be water Cards have spoken Donât wait walls will advance Worlds will shrink ears will give way Cling to a cliché Kiss the poison as the antidote Speak expectations to listen Let fragrance engulf you Did you sleep? A poem of contradictions. Why not? 187 view(s)
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