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You Fell Asleep First (Free verse) by jessicazee
I played cribbage against a Canadian
and won, fifteen twelve, his nobs,
logging off finally
the sound of you breathing
knowing the sound of you sleeping
Iâm being quiet as
I can Iâll
shut the light off
now, wonât flush, sneezing into my armpit
I didn't ever hear that
board
creak
before
(thanks for trying to be quiet
last night, your cough
and footsteps were what
I needed, donât forget
I brought home banana cream pie,
it was free, my modem
dialing is computer for I love
you, my phone calls
are touching, Iâm touched
enough to make a worrywart
of anyone)
itâs the second Conan
when I take the clean pillows
put in the earplugs
talk about breakfast
eggs bacon and toast
as good as a screw
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Weighted score: 5.2622466
Overall Rank: 3976
Posted: March 5, 2005 12:57 AM PST; Last modified: March 6, 2005 10:59 PM PST
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