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The Reply (Free verse) by LintyWeenis What can I say that hasn't already been said?
I love you.
The way every minute I spend with you,
every day,
never lasts long enough.
How when the sun goes down,
you're still here.
What's left to say?
I am only what we create.
What's been done, we did together.
What's left to say?
I do love you.
So much.
So much...it's why I can't.
What's left to say?
I'm sorry.
Up the ladder:
Gunsong
Down the ladder:
Let God Unwrite Itself
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Posted: March 6, 2005 3:45 PM PST; Last modified: March 6, 2005 3:45 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5254 Comments:
Can't say I loved the poem, but I cannot give less than a 10 to "LintyWeenis"
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A lot of things, if you wrote about anything else :-(