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The Reply (Free verse) by LintyWeenis
What can I say that hasn't already been said? I love you. The way every minute I spend with you, every day, never lasts long enough. How when the sun goes down, you're still here. What's left to say? I am only what we create. What's been done, we did together. What's left to say? I do love you. So much. So much...it's why I can't. What's left to say? I'm sorry.

Up the ladder: On Golden Bond
Down the ladder: My Beliefs

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5314
Posted: March 6, 2005 3:45 PM PST; Last modified: March 6, 2005 3:45 PM PST
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[10] zodiac @ 212.38.134.51 | 7-Mar-05/5:10 AM | Reply
re "What can I say that hasn't already been said?"

A lot of things, if you wrote about anything else :-(
[10] edpeterson @ 68.79.19.251 | 7-Mar-05/10:56 AM | Reply
Can't say I loved the poem, but I cannot give less than a 10 to "LintyWeenis"
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