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This Time Imperfect (Lyric) by RGSsparky
I cannot leave here, I cannot stay Forever haunted, more than afraid Asphyxiate on words I would say I'm drawn to a blackened sky as I turn blue There are no flowers, no, not this time There will be no angels gracing the lines, just these stark words I find I'd show a smile but I'm too weak I'd share for you, could I only speak, just how much this hurts me I cannot stay here, I cannot leave Just like all I loved, I'm make believe Imagined heart, I disappear Seems... no one will appear here and make me real There are no flowers, no, not this time There will be no angels gracing the lines, just these stark words I find I'd show a smile but I'm too weak I'd share with you, could I only speak, just how much this hurts me I'd tell you how it haunts me I'd tell you how it haunts me Cuts through my day and sinks into my dreams I'd tell you how it haunts me Cuts through my day and sinks into my dreams You don't care that it haunts me There are no flowers, no, not this time There will be no angels gracing the lines, just these stark words I find I'd show a smile but I'm too weak I'd share with you, could I only speak, just how much this hurts me Just how much this hurts me Just how much you...

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.9090909
Weighted score: 3.4545455
Overall Rank: 13604
Posted: November 22, 2004 2:00 AM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2004 2:00 AM PST
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[n/a] RGSsparky @ 128.243.220.22 | 22-Nov-04/2:01 AM | Reply
Poemwanker here i come, give me my wings.
Can you tell me where these lyrics are from, please someone know.
[0] Bobjim @ 143.167.79.201 > RGSsparky | 22-Nov-04/3:20 AM | Reply
Not a clue. But as soon as I started reading this I thought, "Sparky never wrote this".
I've decided not to get my poemwanker back yet, I've got too many good poems that would lose it for me again.
Btw, 0
[2] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 22-Nov-04/4:51 PM | Reply
Please do not post things you have not written. This sucks no matter who, and I don't care, wrote it.
[0] deleted user @ 203.217.92.81 | 6-Dec-04/12:34 AM | Reply
you fuckin idiot! i hate you! this is Davey Havok from AFI's work, how dare you steal this! take this down now. youve got some nerve trying to pass this off as your own
[n/a] RGSsparky @ 128.243.220.21 > deleted user | 7-Mar-05/12:29 PM | Reply
correction, i havent tried to pass it off as my own, hence my first comment. DICKHEAD!
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