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The 8th Day (Free verse) by whispern_smoke_wisp
The Beatles
made a very interesting point
when they asserted
that their were 8 days in a week
I often feel
that that cannot be too far from reality
since I so often feel
like I am missing something.
it could be a day I have lost
I wouldnt be surprised
I am not to organized .
But I wonder,
am I the only one missing these days
is there a whole world wide society
organized around the goal
of making me loose this one day of the week
Were the Beatles
horrible traitors
making this song
letting the truth slip out
Supposing that this
rather fantastical version
is not true
then
what is the truth
Where has the 8th day gone?
Are we all missing it?
I think that that
seems a bit strange
6 billion some people
all loosing things
all at the same time.
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Posted: March 4, 2005 7:01 PM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2005 7:01 PM PST
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Also, "loose" should be "lose"
-zarina