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The Observatory (Free verse) by Roisin
Rifling through thoughts to find the flaw Is it me who stands between us? Or are we standing close eyes closed, holding hands, feeling not each other but skin?

Up the ladder: My brain’s dialogue
Down the ladder: How Pepsi Killed JFK

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9449
Posted: May 11, 2006 7:29 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2006 8:07 AM PDT
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[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 11-May-06/1:44 PM | Reply
This is good, thoughtful and plenty of alliteration.
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