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The Observatory (Free verse) by Roisin

Rifling through thoughts to find the flaw Is it me who stands between us? Or are we standing close eyes closed, holding hands, feeling not each other but skin?

Ranger 11-May-06/1:44 PM
This is good, thoughtful and plenty of alliteration.




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