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Free verse № 121121

Of Pride and Climate

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Mar 2005 · 2 comments

It is strange To see reflections in the sky To watch your withering fortune And to believe in it all With no regrets Or excuses Broken One foot in heaven The other in the fire It is strange That a dislodged heart Grows too heavy for the hands But it is so

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[10] crooked_smile 6-Mar-05/5:55 PM Reply
i really like this
[n/a] Alex Green 28-Aug-07/2:36 PM Reply
ah, imagery... beautiful