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Of Pride and Climate (Free verse) by MacFrantic It is strange
To see reflections in the sky
To watch your withering fortune
And to believe in it all
With no regrets
Or excuses
Broken
One foot in heaven
The other in the fire
It is strange
That a dislodged heart
Grows too heavy for the hands
But it is so
Up the ladder:
the light of a truly bright day
Down the ladder:
My Golden Birthday
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Posted: March 5, 2005 8:58 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2005 8:58 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6740 Comments:
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crooked_smile @ 152.163.100.135
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6-Mar-05/5:55 PM
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i really like this
ah, imagery... beautiful
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