poemranker ::for sue (20030815) by nentwined

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for sue (20030815)

by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 15 Aug 2003 · 14 comments

her name starts with s or maybe z and she's always got time for a nip of tea or maybe beer. with n levels of comprehension she'll juggle n+1; you wonder what's happening, confusion: she'll be done. life throws her a pickle and she makes chocolate cake with pickles on the side as an inside joke because all the best jokes come from the inside. a tear in her eye is cause for concern and best fixed with epoxy. or staples. or maybe beer. and poetry.

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14 comments

[8] Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/2:24 PM Reply
have a look at mine. 8
[7] sliver 15-Aug-03/2:34 PM Reply
Sounds like a real catch
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> 15-Aug-03/2:53 PM Reply
Nooooooooooooooooooooooo. Poop on your face, 0.
[n/a] nentwined › <{Baba^Yaga}> 15-Aug-03/2:54 PM Reply
Muahahah! I wiN!111!
[n/a] horus8 › nentwined 15-Aug-03/5:05 PM Reply
No, you don't.
[10] <~> 15-Aug-03/3:27 PM Reply
thanks,, k. um. i mean, um, er, well, you know who you are!!!

xo,

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[n/a] nentwined › <~> 15-Aug-03/3:31 PM Reply
'We want Information...Information...Information.'
'Who are you?'
'The new Letter B.'
'Who is Letter A?'
'You are Letter K.'
'I am not a letter - I am a free Man!'
[[laughter]]

BAKA! ;)
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › nentwined 15-Aug-03/3:46 PM Reply
explain bish. ;/
[n/a] horus8 › nentwined 16-Aug-03/1:03 PM Reply
Are you in need of a suppository?
[10] INTRANSIT 15-Aug-03/4:55 PM Reply
Bing fucking go!
[n/a] Mr Pig (again) 16-Aug-03/1:42 AM Reply
Id there a liasion on this site I should know about?

One wishes to join.
[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite 5-Mar-05/11:28 AM Reply
i love this
it doesnt make much sense to me
but the sound of it makes it wonderful anyway
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[1] Holy Tits 18-Jan-07/7:40 AM Reply
A nip of tea? You mean Japanese tea? Jesus Christ, this is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO bad.
[10] <~> 9-Jul-08/7:47 AM Reply
ha! thanks for the smile, k
:)