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for sue (20030815) (Free verse) by nentwined
her name starts with s or maybe z and she's always got time for a nip of tea or maybe beer. with n levels of comprehension she'll juggle n+1; you wonder what's happening, confusion: she'll be done. life throws her a pickle and she makes chocolate cake with pickles on the side as an inside joke because all the best jokes come from the inside. a tear in her eye is cause for concern and best fixed with epoxy. or staples. or maybe beer. and poetry.

Up the ladder: HATE
Down the ladder: Fighting before bed

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.892857
Weighted score: 6.888177
Overall Rank: 254
Posted: August 15, 2003 2:22 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2003 2:22 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] Sir.Psycho.Sexy @ 159.134.55.33 | 15-Aug-03/2:24 PM | Reply
have a look at mine. 8
[7] sliver @ 63.190.73.69 | 15-Aug-03/2:34 PM | Reply
Sounds like a real catch
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Aug-03/2:53 PM | Reply
Nooooooooooooooooooooooo. Poop on your face, 0.
[n/a] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 15-Aug-03/2:54 PM | Reply
Muahahah! I wiN!111!
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > nentwined | 15-Aug-03/5:05 PM | Reply
No, you don't.
[10] <~> @ 172.168.169.162 | 15-Aug-03/3:27 PM | Reply
thanks,, k. um. i mean, um, er, well, you know who you are!!!

xo,

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[n/a] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 > <~> | 15-Aug-03/3:31 PM | Reply
'We want Information...Information...Information.'
'Who are you?'
'The new Letter B.'
'Who is Letter A?'
'You are Letter K.'
'I am not a letter - I am a free Man!'
[[laughter]]

BAKA! ;)
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 66.52.157.205 > nentwined | 15-Aug-03/3:46 PM | Reply
explain bish. ;/
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > nentwined | 16-Aug-03/1:03 PM | Reply
Are you in need of a suppository?
[10] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 15-Aug-03/4:55 PM | Reply
Bing fucking go!
[n/a] Mr Pig (again) @ 62.105.119.105 | 16-Aug-03/1:42 AM | Reply
Id there a liasion on this site I should know about?

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[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 205.188.116.135 | 5-Mar-05/11:28 AM | Reply
i love this
it doesnt make much sense to me
but the sound of it makes it wonderful anyway
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[1] Holy Tits @ 195.194.75.209 | 18-Jan-07/7:40 AM | Reply
A nip of tea? You mean Japanese tea? Jesus Christ, this is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO bad.
[10] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 9-Jul-08/7:47 AM | Reply
ha! thanks for the smile, k
:)
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