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for sue (20030815) (Free verse) by nentwined
her name starts with s
or maybe z
and she's always got time
for a nip of tea
or maybe beer.
with n levels of comprehension
she'll juggle n+1;
you wonder what's happening, confusion:
she'll be done.
life throws her a pickle
and she makes chocolate cake
with pickles on the side
as an inside joke
because all the best jokes
come from the inside.
a tear in her eye
is cause for concern
and best fixed
with epoxy.
or staples.
or maybe beer.
and poetry.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.892857
Weighted score: 6.888177
Overall Rank: 254
Posted: August 15, 2003 2:22 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2003 2:22 PM PDT
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