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HATE (Free verse) by forsaken'sbigbro Live to hate
and
Hate to live
On the outside
I'm so quiet
So peaceful
No hate
Only love
To give
But on the inside
I'm loud
So ready for war
Full of hate
With no love
To give
I just can't tell
With one is the true me
I run into the darkness
To get away from myself
I need to hide from myself
But I can't be alone
Cause I'm scared of myself
But I can't handle people
I hate with a passion
But I don't like to be alone
Some one tell me
Whats wrong with me
But I'll hate any answer
You give me
Some times I wonder
If theres any hope
For someone with so much
HATE
Up the ladder:
The Towel Head Blues
Down the ladder:
for sue (20030815)
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Posted: July 15, 2003 10:54 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2003 10:54 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.888177 Overall Rank: 253 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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15-Jul-03/2:22 PM
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"forsaken 63.88.160.101" 'nough said. Sad, really sad.
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forsaken @ 63.88.160.101
> horus8
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16-Jul-03/5:37 AM
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What's so sad? That's how most of america is.
So So
I wonder too if there is hope for someone w/ so much hate. Sounds like a lonely life that you've captured here. Have you seen American History X? Sad story about how people take advantage of angry white young men and misdirect the anger that's built up in their lives due to having hard, crappy lives.
For fuck's sake woman. I knew it was only going to be a matter of time before some dullard told hate-boy here about American History X. My mind contains your mind.
Sure it does. Did you follow me to this poem where no one had visited for over a week just to throw your brilliant comments at me? We've got to stop meeting like this! And I suppose you don't think it would benefit him to see how the movie played out (not to mention Ed Norton at his hottest moment)? Have you ever met any of these young people who have been targeted to join these hate cults? They are worse (and more devout) than AA members! Anyway, he directs his anger at Jewish people and has not mentioned people of color, so maybe he could be put to more constructive use in getting Palestine liberated from the Zionists.
After reading what you said I went out and bought America History X since I have ever seen it. To tell the truth it made me cry at the end, when his brother got shot. He was changing for the better and a stupid shot him. Back to what you said about my anger is directed towards Jews is false. I have no problem with Jews, infact my favorite teacher in high school was Jewish. I just think they shouldn't have let themselfs be killed like that. I know I wasn't there and all I know are from books, but I'm just saying I would have died fighting. They thing is I'm totally against any form of war, but if me and my family where getting push around like the Jews where in Germany you better believe I would be killing me some Nazis fucks. The thing is I don't hate anyone for a stupid reason like color or ethic background. I hate because of who they are in their mind and their heart.
Wowzers. You seem so harmless on the outside. But deep down you're a seething cauldron of rage. A turbulent cess pool of corruption. Kids better stay away from you because you're dangerous. Dangerous to the max. And dark. And mysterious. You're OuT oF coNtROl, man. You're way beyond the extreme. You're special. Yeah. Right.
I not mentioned once being specail, or more dangerous then the next guy. I'm just saying that people aren't what they seem. They'll tell you that your friend, but if you gave them a chance they would stab you in the back. Dark maybe, but far from mysterious I'm a open book you ask I'll tell. Out of control is way of as well I control my hatred and my rage.
Guess this is one of your better poems. But don't ya have anything cheerful to say?
This is better than alot of the other shit I've been reading on this site. I think if you work on some of the lines you could improve this quite a bit. I like your honesty and openness.
Pitiful
Voting on your own poems. Insecurity is sooooo hot. OMG ur like a starving artist ZOMG 385 view(s)
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