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HATE (Free verse) by forsaken'sbigbro

Live to hate and Hate to live On the outside I'm so quiet So peaceful No hate Only love To give But on the inside I'm loud So ready for war Full of hate With no love To give I just can't tell With one is the true me I run into the darkness To get away from myself I need to hide from myself But I can't be alone Cause I'm scared of myself But I can't handle people I hate with a passion But I don't like to be alone Some one tell me Whats wrong with me But I'll hate any answer You give me Some times I wonder If theres any hope For someone with so much HATE

forsaken'sbigbro 3-Dec-03/8:12 AM
I not mentioned once being specail, or more dangerous then the next guy. I'm just saying that people aren't what they seem. They'll tell you that your friend, but if you gave them a chance they would stab you in the back. Dark maybe, but far from mysterious I'm a open book you ask I'll tell. Out of control is way of as well I control my hatred and my rage.




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