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Woman on the Stairs (Free verse) by James Rykelangeli
Under a chandelier of stars Winds the stairway of the sky Where the marmoreal moon Takes her soundless steps. The newel is The nightingale’s song. The steps’ stone is Black star sapphires. Her silver gown Caresses the stairs. Her silver eyes Give the night their shine. She is always adjusting The faceted sea, Her imperfect mirror, Tilting it out and in Upon the shore, Flattering her Eternally. With her ascent Awaits her groom Behind the door of aurora With its many hues And a lark’s song for a handle.

Up the ladder: Paris CDG, 4-8-03
Down the ladder: broodmood

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6462
Posted: March 4, 2005 12:47 AM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2005 12:47 AM PST
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Comments:
[9] Dovina @ 12.72.7.33 | 4-Mar-05/7:44 AM | Reply
Rich with language. Although it evokes grand visions of the night, I look for meaning and shall perhaps look again.
[n/a] Goad @ 217.82.3.177 > Dovina | 4-Mar-05/6:22 PM | Reply
No, Dov', this marmoreal newel
(Though it brightens the night like a jewel)
Wasn't written for mullin'
It's just some wank pullin'
On his moonlight bespatteréd tool.
[9] Dovina @ 12.72.6.79 > Goad | 5-Mar-05/7:28 AM | Reply
No, Goad, this staircase newel
Indeed brightens night like a jewel
Its chandelier stars
And mystery like mars
Bespatter your thoughts to the cesspool
[n/a] Goad @ 217.82.3.177 > Dovina | 5-Mar-05/1:39 PM | Reply
Anapestic is tricky to get
It's quite clear you've not mastered it yet.
I hope you'd've redacted
And were merely distracted
'cuz the newel was making you wet.
[8] edpeterson @ 68.20.2.148 | 4-Mar-05/11:32 AM | Reply
and then he pulled it out and made her smoke it.
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