Re: Everglades parkway by INTRANSIT	1-Nov-04/5:57 AM
The closest takes flight arcing in earnest. "Oh, I know you didn't just..." I close one eye and hunker expecting a sudden and bleeding passenger. I click on the four-ways and ease to the shoulder. The sentence structure becomes repetitive, with all the "I-verb-object"
Re: The correct order of things by Stephen Robins	29-Oct-04/8:22 PM
a nude, three-legged sack race in a mosquito swarm.
Re: The Star Of The Bum by Blindpoetry	29-Oct-04/8:18 PM
is this written in braille or some other code?
Re: Call upon the wrath of god on ye by Imago	29-Oct-04/8:15 PM
rigiditus nippulatum, et clampostona ingratiae solorum solarum, slapadiddle dildatum
Re: a comment on Dear George Bush by scitz	29-Oct-04/8:07 PM
you never saw this kinda thing happen when the dimocrats were ruining the cuntry. I think saddam chicken salad is running the cuntry and the cities too, and that he only allows the appearance of democracy so that lazy bastards like myself don't get too riled. a smoothe transition y'know? of course, fuck old George, but the "poem" is awful, and hackneyed. everyone says that shit, day in and day out, fuck of mr pres...bla bla bla.
Re: The Old Man by spriggan	29-Oct-04/8:02 PM
a gaping hole. This is great.
Re: The Old Man by spriggan	29-Oct-04/8:01 PM
fucking hilarious. Why is he taking pain killers that poison his body? There are perfectly good painkillers on the market that do not poison the body. nothing worse than a poor afficted soul, eh? the end line makes it all worth while, and completely stands this motherfucker on its head and redeems it with a broom handle.
Re: From Womb To Wood by Caducus	29-Oct-04/7:49 PM
I don't think the end redeems anything. He should never have died? hmmmm I thought it was well conceived and well written until the last few lines... though the entire last stanza is awkward.
Re: Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus	29-Oct-04/5:43 PM
asshole. nigger. stupid sonovabitch. Idiot. imbecile. mammoth.
Re: I Don't Care by ForgottenSoul17	29-Oct-04/4:27 PM
a floppy, shaven walrus clit
Re: I WILL SURVIVE by massangel62	29-Oct-04/4:25 PM
you have an ugly face
Re: Ash by horus8	28-Oct-04/9:01 PM
i emailed you something scary. did you get it?
Re: Ash by horus8	28-Oct-04/9:01 PM
chunky
Re: Delicate Was by klosterfobik	28-Oct-04/7:01 AM
i had intended to rank this poem on its merits, but then I read the comments. adverb indeed. -0-
Re: Alone by rrashi	27-Oct-04/5:28 AM
and in which orafice were you enjoying this "cone"?
Re: repeated sins, repeated prayer by oneglove	27-Oct-04/5:25 AM
you are so weak. you are so inadequate.
Re: Grandma in love by Caducus	26-Oct-04/11:38 AM
i would suggest "new" in place of "anew" also, "fall" in place of "falter" a 10 anyway
Re: Grandma in love by Caducus	26-Oct-04/11:36 AM
a wicked and inspired jug solo
Re: Harvey the Dolphin Sucker by T. Jonathron Remp	26-Oct-04/10:54 AM
comment by Richard E. Watley just beautiful
Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	26-Oct-04/5:07 AM
shame you could not work "tars" into this somehow.