Free verse № 111212
Delicate Was
Just when my unmeant imagination thought it safe,
just when I thought I'd learned -
to forget to remember
the suntanned symmetry of you;
I happened upon a tragical trace
of a scent of past perfume -
a sickening sweet, redolent relic,
of almost - always past,
left upon a pillow
on the unmade bed where once we laid
and dreamt and shuddered.
Just that one slippery, apple-green breath
of delicate was
stole truth from time and past from fate.
So long it seems - an age ago,
maybe even longer,
so hard to tell these days -
harder still to tell these days from dreams -
dreams of together - perfect and peculiar us.
22 comments
The Islam Society for Grammar Detention
the scents of the women you've had?Like their perfume,lotion or shampoo?Sorry if its "cutesy".And as for affection your correct,as for Ben Harper-ish your very wrong.
seems more dramatic this way?Or not?
Your examples are not grammatically similar to "delicate was".
Squids and all!
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