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Delicate Was (Free verse) by klosterfobik

Just when my unmeant imagination thought it safe, just when I thought I'd learned - to forget to remember the suntanned symmetry of you; I happened upon a tragical trace of a scent of past perfume - a sickening sweet, redolent relic, of almost - always past, left upon a pillow on the unmade bed where once we laid and dreamt and shuddered. Just that one slippery, apple-green breath of delicate was stole truth from time and past from fate. So long it seems - an age ago, maybe even longer, so hard to tell these days - harder still to tell these days from dreams - dreams of together - perfect and peculiar us.

klosterfobik 8-Sep-04/1:07 PM
Delicate was refers to a fleeting - fragile memory left behind by a girl in the form of a sweet odor,its delicate because if you tamper with it it will go away.Do you not even appriciate the
the scents of the women you've had?Like their perfume,lotion or shampoo?Sorry if its "cutesy".And as for affection your correct,as for Ben Harper-ish your very wrong.




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