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I Don't Care (Free verse) by ForgottenSoul17
Dont leave me Dont love me Dont talk to me I dont need you I dont want you I dont want to see you any more Get out of my life Get out of my head Get out of this world No I dont care No I dont love you No I dont want to dry your tears You left me You hate me You hurt me Now I must say good bye to you Now I must leave you like you left me Now I must go back to the darkness and die

Up the ladder: The Negro
Down the ladder: Orion takes aim

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3558
Posted: September 7, 2004 3:08 PM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2004 3:08 PM PDT
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.154.163.133 | 7-Sep-04/5:44 PM | Reply
toilet
[n/a] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 7-Sep-04/7:08 PM | Reply
And just how do you reconcile a 10 vote with a comment like that?
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 82.39.20.71 > Dovina | 29-Oct-04/4:37 PM | Reply
By flinging a packet of bakewell tarts into a homeless shelter and running away in terror
[10] Brandy_n_Cali @ 4.182.251.103 | 7-Sep-04/7:46 PM | Reply
nice!! reminds me of one of my own
[n/a] LintyWeenis @ 152.163.253.99 | 8-Sep-04/2:21 PM | Reply
Hmm. We've all felt like that at one point or another.
[n/a] edpeterson @ 68.79.20.59 | 29-Oct-04/4:27 PM | Reply
a floppy, shaven walrus clit
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