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The Star Of The Bum

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Oct 2004 · 4 comments

Your inqueryness Shot me down Like the star... Of the Bum I control what you say What you do is very different What you feel is very Horrendous I think much like Nothing About You I'm in depth I can see water Your eyes clear as day I must have a leak I control how you walk the day How you walk, it pays for the rent How you wish your life was more fake disastrous I think much like something... Not like you Like anyone Like my mind Much like Nothing About You

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[7] Dovina 29-Oct-04/11:21 AM Reply
"very Horrendous" is the same as horrendous, and why capitalize it. "I think much like Nothing About You" means something, but what?
[n/a] Blindpoetry › Dovina 29-Oct-04/9:48 PM Reply
I capitalized 'Nothing About You' on purpose... Because those words... just... sort of stuck to me. ...No really diffinate reason, I admit, though.

blahblahlbah.

The horrendous part was just random. ..*sigh*
blablahblahlbahlbah
[7] Dovina › Blindpoetry 31-Oct-04/9:32 AM Reply
You are right about blahblahlbah.
[n/a] edpeterson 29-Oct-04/8:18 PM Reply
is this written in braille or some other code?