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The Star Of The Bum (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
Your inqueryness
Shot me down
Like the star...
Of the Bum
I control what you say
What you do is very different
What you feel is very Horrendous
I think much like Nothing About You
I'm in depth
I can see water
Your eyes clear as day
I must have a leak
I control how you walk the day
How you walk, it pays for the rent
How you wish your life was more fake disastrous
I think much like something...
Not like you
Like anyone
Like my mind
Much like
Nothing
About
You
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9118
Posted: October 28, 2004 5:19 PM PDT; Last modified: October 28, 2004 5:19 PM PDT
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The horrendous part was just random. ..*sigh*
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