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The Star Of The Bum (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
Your inqueryness Shot me down Like the star... Of the Bum I control what you say What you do is very different What you feel is very Horrendous I think much like Nothing About You I'm in depth I can see water Your eyes clear as day I must have a leak I control how you walk the day How you walk, it pays for the rent How you wish your life was more fake disastrous I think much like something... Not like you Like anyone Like my mind Much like Nothing About You

Up the ladder: Bullet Heaven
Down the ladder: Two Years

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9067
Posted: October 28, 2004 5:19 PM PDT; Last modified: October 28, 2004 5:19 PM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 24.52.156.155 | 29-Oct-04/11:21 AM | Reply
"very Horrendous" is the same as horrendous, and why capitalize it. "I think much like Nothing About You" means something, but what?
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.11.192.79 > Dovina | 29-Oct-04/9:48 PM | Reply
I capitalized 'Nothing About You' on purpose... Because those words... just... sort of stuck to me. ...No really diffinate reason, I admit, though.

blahblahlbah.

The horrendous part was just random. ..*sigh*
blablahblahlbahlbah
[7] Dovina @ 24.52.156.155 > Blindpoetry | 31-Oct-04/9:32 AM | Reply
You are right about blahblahlbah.
[n/a] edpeterson @ 68.79.20.59 | 29-Oct-04/8:18 PM | Reply
is this written in braille or some other code?
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