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The Star Of The Bum (Free verse) by Blindpoetry

Your inqueryness Shot me down Like the star... Of the Bum I control what you say What you do is very different What you feel is very Horrendous I think much like Nothing About You I'm in depth I can see water Your eyes clear as day I must have a leak I control how you walk the day How you walk, it pays for the rent How you wish your life was more fake disastrous I think much like something... Not like you Like anyone Like my mind Much like Nothing About You

Blindpoetry 29-Oct-04/9:48 PM
I capitalized 'Nothing About You' on purpose... Because those words... just... sort of stuck to me. ...No really diffinate reason, I admit, though.

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The horrendous part was just random. ..*sigh*
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