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it's okay to cry, idiot (Free verse) by calliope Even branches cry once in awhile,
so let your tears fall down.
without the branches weeping
we'd have nothing strewn about
to rake into piles and jump into
when autumn comes around.
so let your fears be quelled,
them tears will surely soothe you now.
Up the ladder:
Two Years
Down the ladder:
David & Derrick
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Posted: July 1, 2005 1:29 AM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2005 1:29 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9084 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.7.163
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1-Jul-05/4:08 PM
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"idiot" in the title detracts. Line 2 could be left out without loss.
Line one is awesome.
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