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Hot Pig (Free verse) by kingit
Shame slides off the back of my planet Satan runs around in a little white dress with dirty toes where shorn hooves once gathered Muck- he dirties the vestibule floor waiting for trick OR candy I know he prefers meat--- AND... tricks even more... a requested refreshment imbibed the little white-dressed one runs off into the night.., now pain runs up the front of my world seeping into all my scars with single-cell memory oh the lambasting I took that Halloween.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9081
Posted: October 30, 2003 2:41 PM PST; Last modified: October 30, 2003 2:41 PM PST
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Comments:
[6] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 | 30-Oct-03/7:04 PM | Reply
It must be hard for you to focus with that pumpkin helmet on.
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.60.162 | 30-Oct-03/8:47 PM | Reply
yeah!- it's really tight on th dick!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.103 | 31-Oct-03/1:41 AM | Reply
This would be better without the arbitrary indentation and line breaks.
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.61.241 | 31-Oct-03/10:22 AM | Reply
it's not intentional--honest!
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.63.24 | 2-Nov-03/2:28 PM | Reply
Naw, I've already been fitted with a pumpkin
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