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Grandma in love (Free verse) by Caducus
On grass silvered by dew
I fell by your violets to pray,
Everything old was shining in gold
And you were anew
As you soared to the sky in gray.
From the urn
I dusted my lips,
Tasting you for one last time
Forced to learn from all of this
That you are no longer mine.
Our love became wrinkled from happiness.
Is this why I falter not to grief ?
Maybe I prefer sadness
When I sleep alone in our bed,
Circled into an old mottled shape
Like your unlaid wreath.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4039
Posted: May 17, 2004 10:56 AM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2004 11:26 AM PDT
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