Re: The How To on Haikus by <Wankster>	24-Apr-04/6:11 AM
yawn
Re: 8 or 9 by tadpole	22-Apr-04/4:31 PM
I love it. I would get rid of the double rocks in the first stanza, and remove one of the coins at the end, probably quarter. very good poem.
Re: From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik	20-Apr-04/7:21 AM
not learned, earned.
Re: Sissy Faggot by Shardik	20-Apr-04/7:15 AM
unbelievable. It reads like a page of my diary. I can SOOOO relate to this. Kewl. my parents really never understood me neither. I hav not cut mysefl in 2 weeks, but its so hard.
Re: The Flame by Fire_is_cool	19-Apr-04/9:04 AM
better than smoke inhalation, which is more than i can say for many of the others.
Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco	19-Apr-04/7:36 AM
it is especially difficult for a reader of lyrics to imagine the beat, the cant, the rhythm of a song, when it does not rhyme. but, even as a poem, i think this is very good.
Re: Do You Like It by hotwire	19-Apr-04/7:31 AM
i can see it being a good song.
Re: The Song of Summer Youth (II) by cleverdevice	19-Apr-04/7:24 AM
could be good. I won't vote now, because this obviously needs to be edited.
Re: stranger by francis nor capule	19-Apr-04/7:19 AM
i think this COULD be good, but the punctuation is horribly distracting, as is the poor grammar.
Re: I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	16-Apr-04/3:25 PM
it appears the real play is acted out in the gallery.
Re: when do dreams fade? by francis nor capule	16-Apr-04/2:56 PM
you might find your soul buried beneath your language skills if you bothered to look for them. I think the lack of sensation left in the wake of pain is a theme that CAN be handled without cliche, but it takes flawless execution to do so. And a bit more imagination.
Re: Diptych by coffeespoons	16-Apr-04/8:55 AM
I don't care what category you put it in. I think it is great. I just love it.
Re: horus8 accepts black cock for cash by King Abdullah II	15-Apr-04/7:07 PM
if you are going to write a pohm about sumbody , at lest try to make it funny.
Re: Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	15-Apr-04/12:48 PM
and i didnt even read the poem
Re: Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	15-Apr-04/12:47 PM
this by far is the funniest page i have read on this site....yet. priceless.
Re: a comment on forgetful dyke by elizabethann	15-Apr-04/12:32 PM
wait, you forgot one. Author has "angel" in his/her name.
Re: Metaphorically Challenged by Enkidu	15-Apr-04/11:58 AM
HAHAHAHA. Lovely
Re: On A Cliff by colndodg	15-Apr-04/11:49 AM
rife with cliche. cold as ice. forest for the trees. beg for forgiveness, pray for rain. I realize that this was probably intentional, as the whole poem is about "taking that leap" off the cliff, but still, it is hard to read so many without cringing a little. 6
Re: My Life by Fire_is_cool	14-Apr-04/6:59 PM
umm if you die, does the tunnel grow an end?
Re: Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool	14-Apr-04/6:56 PM
HAHAHAHAHA. that is some funny ass bullshit kegparty poetry.