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Metaphorically Challenged (Free verse) by Enkidu
My heart is a skittle Filled with non-toxic chemically enhanced Nutrient-enriched plasticly inclined goodness But you can't break the skittle that is my heart Unless, of course, you chew it up to see the insides My mind is a flower More specifically a sunflower Filled with all of those little somethings in the middle That people like to pick out And tiny children eat and feel sick from

Up the ladder: White Stork
Down the ladder: QUENDOCRACY

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.375
Weighted score: 5.638736
Overall Rank: 2146
Posted: February 20, 2004 9:25 AM PST; Last modified: April 15, 2004 11:54 AM PDT
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Comments:
[9] edpeterson @ 68.79.22.21 | 15-Apr-04/11:58 AM | Reply
HAHAHAHA. Lovely
[9] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 | 16-Apr-04/6:34 AM | Reply
yep - thats a goodun.

But I wonder at the thoughts in your brain that would make tiny children sick.
[8] cheese.doodles @ 76.64.14.95 | 26-Apr-07/4:31 PM | Reply
This is very funny and creative.
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