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Metaphorically Challenged (Free verse) by Enkidu
My heart is a skittle
Filled with non-toxic chemically enhanced
Nutrient-enriched plasticly inclined goodness
But you can't break the skittle that is my heart
Unless, of course, you chew it up to see the insides
My mind is a flower
More specifically a sunflower
Filled with all of those little somethings in the middle
That people like to pick out
And tiny children eat and feel sick from
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Weighted score: 5.638736
Overall Rank: 2145
Posted: February 20, 2004 9:25 AM PST; Last modified: April 15, 2004 11:54 AM PDT
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