Metaphorically Challenged

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Feb 2004 · Edited 15 Apr 2004 · 3 comments

My heart is a skittle Filled with non-toxic chemically enhanced Nutrient-enriched plasticly inclined goodness But you can't break the skittle that is my heart Unless, of course, you chew it up to see the insides My mind is a flower More specifically a sunflower Filled with all of those little somethings in the middle That people like to pick out And tiny children eat and feel sick from

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[9] edpeterson 15-Apr-04/11:58 AM Reply

HAHAHAHA. Lovely

[9] Shuushin 16-Apr-04/6:34 AM Reply

yep - thats a goodun.

But I wonder at the thoughts in your brain that would make tiny children sick.

[8] cheese.doodles 26-Apr-07/4:31 PM Reply

This is very funny and creative.