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Metaphorically Challenged (Free verse) by Enkidu

My heart is a skittle Filled with non-toxic chemically enhanced Nutrient-enriched plasticly inclined goodness But you can't break the skittle that is my heart Unless, of course, you chew it up to see the insides My mind is a flower More specifically a sunflower Filled with all of those little somethings in the middle That people like to pick out And tiny children eat and feel sick from

Shuushin 16-Apr-04/6:34 AM
yep - thats a goodun.

But I wonder at the thoughts in your brain that would make tiny children sick.




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