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Do You Like It (Lyric) by hotwire
Do you like it By Bily Foster Do you like it that i'm nasty Do you like when i'm dirty Do you like when i'm a ho do you like it when i'm tied up do you like it when i'm blinded do you like it when i can't go do you like it that i'm hot do you like it i'm sexy do you like it that i'm reborn do you like it when i rub it do you like it when i touch it do you like it when i make it grow do you like it when i'm on my knees do you like it when it's you i please do you like to watch me moan do you like it when i swallow do you like how it's hollow do you like how it's time for you to moan just a one night trick that sucked your dick and now your the one that's gone

Down the ladder: without you

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3325
Posted: April 18, 2004 6:55 PM PDT; Last modified: April 18, 2004 7:26 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 18-Apr-04/7:52 PM | Reply
As a man, I cannot help but give this a 10.
[n/a] hotwire @ 68.2.245.237 > wilco | 18-Apr-04/8:10 PM | Reply
Thank you VERY much!
[9] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 > wilco | 18-Apr-04/8:25 PM | Reply
That is....assuming that you're female. If not, I'll have to change it to a 0.
[n/a] hotwire @ 68.2.245.237 > wilco | 18-Apr-04/8:27 PM | Reply
Lets just say i've written it for a female singer
[9] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 > hotwire | 18-Apr-04/8:34 PM | Reply
hmmm....good enough I guess..but I'm going to have to change it to a 9 until I hear her sing it..
[10] zodiac @ 67.240.211.71 > hotwire | 18-Apr-04/8:40 PM | Reply
If you ever find a woman who'll agree to sing this for you, I beg you to pull her fingers out of her mouth and nostrils before she suffocates. Then you should give each other home-sterilization jobs using a jury-rigged microwave and tinfoil codpieces before rabbitfucking yourselves off the nearest cliff. -10-
[4] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 19-Apr-04/1:42 AM | Reply
dr. seuss meets 2livecrew. Hmm.

your should be "you're" in the last line.
[6] edpeterson @ 68.79.28.143 | 19-Apr-04/7:31 AM | Reply
i can see it being a good song.
[9] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 19-Apr-04/3:05 PM | Reply
Would that it could be top 40
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