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From Treehouse To Factory (Free verse) by Shardik
Those were spare mornings of boundless energy
Skipped breakfasts, and hardly enough clothing
To layer myself against the sky, and its endless
blue bending roll with the black outside of it.
Stepping on nails, and turning trash into play
The neighborhood boys pick sides, draw straws
Pile up ammo, rocks, shingles, glass, cuss words
and premature fruit to hurl at one another 'till dark.
Or blood... Curiosity killed the cat, but 'twas the
rats that brought it back. There are only so many
holes to dig in a Summer. Only so many elbows and
knees to scab before it's time to eat, and forget.
But that was the Summer I got my first pair of boots
and started smoking in the orange grove with the
older boys in Ozzy shirts. That was also the year my
friend fell out of the tree house and never walked again.
Lying there like a small bird
that had just flown into a window
We drew a tight circle around him, then numbly,
We all went home having earned nothing.
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Weighted score: 6.9682345
Overall Rank: 121
Posted: April 19, 2004 11:36 AM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2004 2:21 PM PDT
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