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Feel the Love (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool We sit alone,
It's getting dark,
Then you touch me,
I think that I could fly,
I feel the flame burning with in my heart,
Then you kiss me,
I think that I might die,
No one can seperate us tonight,
We are meant to be together,
So why wait?
I want to be with you right now,
So what are we waiting for?
I can feel the love tonight.
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Precious Thing 2
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Posted: April 14, 2004 6:47 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2004 6:47 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12156 Comments:
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edpeterson @ 68.79.14.47
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14-Apr-04/6:56 PM
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HAHAHAHAHA. that is some funny ass bullshit kegparty poetry.
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Fire_is_cool @ 65.100.213.166
> edpeterson
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14-Apr-04/7:16 PM
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Thank you I know it sucks.
Sorry I know that it is really lame but hey so I can't write poetry, but at least I'm not the only one that can't.
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