Re: MTV's The Real World: Allpoetry.com by Bluemonkey	25-May-05/6:17 PM
Ever the asshole...
Re: Semite to Semite by PodPoet	23-May-05/8:40 PM
I don't know that this is a concrete...I'm a fan of repetition to some extend but I think it's too much here. Try the "deep dark eyes part mybe every third or fourth stanza...
Re: Spontaneous Combustion by wilco	23-May-05/8:27 PM
So, what happened? I leave for a while and Rockmage comes back filled with old hippie hatred for everything and plasters everyone with zeroes? I'm a little confused.
Re: Swoon by Dovina	23-May-05/3:41 PM
I can't say that I have. I'm going to assume you have, though, and give this an 8.
Re: a comment on Lifted by wilco	12-May-05/8:10 PM
I agree with you. This isn't very good...It's basically a "I havn't written anything in a while and this is my atttempt to start back" piece.
Re: My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee	12-May-05/6:39 PM
I'm all out of love, I'm so lost without you....
Re: White by Enkidu	12-May-05/6:34 PM
This doesn't make a lot of sense and the rhymes seem forced...sorry.
Re: Lake Michigan by jessicazee	12-May-05/6:17 PM
Not near as good as the other Lake Michigan one.
Re: On the Bank of Lake Michigan by jessicazee	12-May-05/6:08 PM
I like it. Could be better...I don't know exactly. I'll leave it to you...It's good as it is...or make it great.
Re: Homecoming by Dovina	12-May-05/6:03 PM
Always a super feeling when you escape without waking them up.
Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	28-Mar-05/5:00 PM
Gotta love music.
Re: Forest Rain by bamf909	26-Feb-05/8:47 PM
One of the better Haikus I've seen in a while.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	25-Feb-05/8:29 PM
Finally, something on the best list that deserves to be there. Well, at least until some anonymous fucking idiot knocked it off. *sigh* Oh well, one day all will be right.
Re: Corner Shop, 5 Quinton Road by Caducus	25-Feb-05/8:25 PM
Not your best by a long shot, but still pretty good.
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	25-Feb-05/8:24 PM
We had an earthquake here a week or so ago. People just sat there with stupid looks on their faces until it was over. I'm telling you, if the big one ever does hit the New Madrid Fault, there's going to be a lot of dead fuckers around here.
Re: Into the Wreckage by zodiac	25-Feb-05/8:17 PM
Wow, I just read three good poems in a row. I don't know what to do....
Re: a comment on A Violent Autumn by bamf909	20-Feb-05/6:52 PM
I kind of had a feeling.
Re: A Violent Autumn by bamf909	20-Feb-05/1:04 PM
Ok, yeah, I like this. Much better than the Pirate thing.
Re: a comment on For Elizabeth, Wherever She May Be by wilco	20-Feb-05/8:51 AM
I can't ever tell if you're serious or not. If you are, thanks.
Re: a comment on Summing Up by Dovina	18-Feb-05/9:20 PM
ouch.