on MTV's The Real World: Allpoetry.com by Bluemonkey
25 May 2005, 6:17 PM
Ever the asshole...
on Semite to Semite by PodPoet
23 May 2005, 8:40 PM
I don't know that this is a concrete...I'm a fan of repetition to some extend but I think it's too much here. Try the "deep dark eyes part mybe every third or fourth stanza...
on Spontaneous Combustion by wilco
23 May 2005, 8:27 PM
So, what happened? I leave for a while and Rockmage comes back filled with old hippie hatred for everything and plasters everyone with zeroes? I'm a little confused.
on My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee
12 May 2005, 6:39 PM
I'm all out of love, I'm so lost without you....
on Lake Michigan by jessicazee
12 May 2005, 6:17 PM
Not near as good as the other Lake Michigan one.
on On the Bank of Lake Michigan by jessicazee
12 May 2005, 6:08 PM
I like it. Could be better...I don't know exactly. I'll leave it to you...It's good as it is...or make it great.
on Homecoming by Dovina
12 May 2005, 6:03 PM
Always a super feeling when you escape without waking them up.
on Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina
28 Mar 2005, 5:00 PM
Gotta love music.
on Forest Rain by bamf909
26 Feb 2005, 8:47 PM
One of the better Haikus I've seen in a while.
on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
25 Feb 2005, 8:29 PM
Finally, something on the best list that deserves to be there. Well, at least until some anonymous fucking idiot knocked it off. *sigh* Oh well, one day all will be right.
on Corner Shop, 5 Quinton Road by Caducus
25 Feb 2005, 8:25 PM
Not your best by a long shot, but still pretty good.
on It’s the Management by Dovina
25 Feb 2005, 8:24 PM
We had an earthquake here a week or so ago. People just sat there with stupid looks on their faces until it was over. I'm telling you, if the big one ever does hit the New Madrid Fault, there's going to be a lot of dead fuckers around here.
on Into the Wreckage by zodiac
25 Feb 2005, 8:17 PM
Wow, I just read three good poems in a row. I don't know what to do....
replying on A Violent Autumn by bamf909
20 Feb 2005, 6:52 PM
I kind of had a feeling.
on A Violent Autumn by bamf909
20 Feb 2005, 1:04 PM
Ok, yeah, I like this. Much better than the Pirate thing.
replying on For Elizabeth, Wherever She May Be by wilco
20 Feb 2005, 8:51 AM
I can't ever tell if you're serious or not. If you are, thanks.
replying on Summing Up by Dovina
18 Feb 2005, 9:20 PM
ouch.