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White (Free verse) by Enkidu Dear journal
We are back
But are we safe and sound?
What's here to keep us down?
I'm sure the bells will ring
But does that make up for anything?
My home at last has come to me
Shimmering light in ecstasy
Oh what a place that place would be
If love meant love
And free meant free
Up the ladder:
Last Time
Down the ladder:
Hot Pig
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Posted: November 2, 2004 6:52 AM PST; Last modified: May 12, 2005 11:43 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9062 Comments:
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wilco @ 24.165.207.93
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12-May-05/6:34 PM
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This doesn't make a lot of sense and the rhymes seem forced...sorry.
Black (free verse) by Blackidu
Dear Massa, We is black but is we safe and soun'? Why's you allus keepin' us down? Is it cause we's brown? 198 view(s)
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