White

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Nov 2004 · Edited 12 May 2005 · 2 comments

Dear journal We are back But are we safe and sound? What's here to keep us down? I'm sure the bells will ring But does that make up for anything? My home at last has come to me Shimmering light in ecstasy Oh what a place that place would be If love meant love And free meant free

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[4] wilco 12-May-05/6:34 PM Reply

This doesn't make a lot of sense and the rhymes seem forced...sorry.

[10] zodiac 13-May-05/5:14 AM Reply

Black (free verse) by Blackidu

Dear Massa,

We is black
but is we safe and soun'?
Why's you allus keepin' us down?

Is it cause we's brown?