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Two Years (Free verse) by berdabear I hear little footsteps across my kitchen floor
Early morning chatter
not yet sure how to say what plagues him every day
"I lud you mommy"
This much is clear
Enough to fill my heart with cheer
with each little footstep I hear.
Up the ladder:
Jay
Down the ladder:
my memories
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Posted: November 1, 2004 4:22 PM PST; Last modified: November 1, 2004 4:22 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9088 Comments:
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D. $ Fontera @ 204.98.2.23
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2-Nov-04/7:21 AM
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Not terrible. *8*
I can feel the echoes of your love in the words you have written. Thank you for sharing them.
How very true, I have since added new footsteps.
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