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Two Years

by berdabear

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Nov 2004 · 3 comments

I hear little footsteps across my kitchen floor Early morning chatter not yet sure how to say what plagues him every day "I lud you mommy" This much is clear Enough to fill my heart with cheer with each little footstep I hear.

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[8] D. $ Fontera 2-Nov-04/7:21 AM Reply
Not terrible. *8*
[9] sliver 2-Nov-04/8:33 PM Reply
I can feel the echoes of your love in the words you have written. Thank you for sharing them.
[n/a] berdabear 10-Apr-08/12:16 PM Reply
How very true, I have since added new footsteps.