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Never Did You (Free verse) by Dreammaker1024
I couldnât help but feel sad, I couldnât help but cry, but the one
thing I couldnât do was get over you.
You took me by surprise, that day long ago. You took my heart on a
whirlwind adventure through heaven. The one thing you never did was
reveal your feelings for me.
In my nights rest you conquered my dreams, in my days weakness you
forced your image into my minds vision. But you never came to my
reality to present yourself as mine.
For years youâve been my wish on the first risen star, in recent
months youâve been the prayer constantly on my nights lips. Yet in
all this time I was never yours.
Last night we had a conversation, my thoughts are confused. Today weâ
ll talk once more, this new girl of yours is the topic. Still tonight
you'll let me think I have a chance.
Iâve now realized that things may never be, Iâve now started to try
to forget my many feelings. Being in love with love is a cruel reality
when it leads to you being in love alone.
I couldnât help but feel sad, I couldnât help but cry, but the one
thing I still couldnât do was get over you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9115
Posted: January 25, 2005 4:21 PM PST; Last modified: March 11, 2005 9:15 PM PST
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