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On the Bank of Lake Michigan (Free verse) by jessicazee
The water we share
is the way we know east,
our sunrises alewived beaches.
A great lake,
an erection at its end,
pointing downward, tired.
I called it an ocean
in my youth, I thought
I could see across to Michigan,
âAn optical illusion,â my dad would say,
âA puddle on a hot street,
a bag on the road you think is a cat.â
The sun never sets on our water,
moons, though, wane and swell.
We swam in storms, naked,
heedless, bathed in fresh water.
The beach at the zoo
downwind from seals, owls,
lions in heat, field trips
our fathers underwent a long time
ago, feeding bears cheese crackers,
otters just as funny, almost
touching monkeyâs hands,
the elephants have all grown up.
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2005 2:13 AM PDT
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