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MTV's The Real World: Allpoetry.com (Haiku) by Bluemonkey Give me feedback please.
Fellate my fragile ego
even though I suck.
Up the ladder:
Unspoken
Down the ladder:
a dialouge between a pessimst and a young child
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.4
Posted: May 24, 2005 11:16 AM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2005 11:16 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.809275 Overall Rank: 11019 Comments:
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deleted user @ 81.69.23.196
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24-May-05/1:17 PM
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You may suck, as long as you spit out something decent
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deleted user @ 81.69.23.196
> deleted user
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24-May-05/4:16 PM
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Don't misunderstand me; you can write anything you want. But don't abuse the HAIKU. Have the sense to call it 'Bluemonkey's Haiku', or something in that vein.
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Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.99
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25-May-05/8:33 AM
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I apologize, my friend, but Nentwined has yet to put a category on the Poemranker called Bluemonkey's Haiku...the moment the does I'll change it, I assure you.
Ever the asshole...
i get it.
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