|
|
Friends Forever (Free verse) by x311
Silver tongued demon
Speaking smoothly in my ear
Telling me what I want to hear
While you tear me apart from the inside
You know me so well
Been with me for quite a while
Flashing your white-toothed smile
But the whole time, you've lied
Weakening my defenses
You are ripping down my wall
As I heed your every beck and call
You've used me as my heart has cried
Making me feel comfortable
You use my weaknesses against me
Almost ready to unleash your fury
Pandora's Box, now untied
The time has come
I finally give in to your demands
Unimaginable things now done by my hands
Dark thoughts wash in with the tide
Entirely consumed
I don't care about anything
Because of this serpent's sting
Nothing left but an empty shell, completely fried.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
0 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 0 |
8 |
|
0 | 0 |
7 |
|
0 | 1 |
6 |
|
1 | 0 |
5 |
|
1 | 1 |
4 |
|
1 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 1 |
2 |
|
0 | 0 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
1 | 0 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 4.285714
Weighted score: 4.807899
Overall Rank: 11023
Posted: July 18, 2002 10:49 AM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2002 10:49 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
235 view(s)
|