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A Violent Autumn (Haiku) by bamf909 Once-verdant leaves drop,
Tears from a gunmetal sky,
Bullets in harsh winds.
Up the ladder:
Milkman's Eyes
Down the ladder:
Love that's not true or double-sided
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Posted: February 20, 2005 12:21 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2005 12:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4090 Comments:
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wilco @ 24.165.207.93
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20-Feb-05/1:04 PM
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Ok, yeah, I like this. Much better than the Pirate thing.
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bamf909 @ 4.254.219.166
> wilco
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20-Feb-05/1:16 PM
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yeah, actually, i didn't write the pirate stuff.
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wilco @ 24.165.207.93
> bamf909
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20-Feb-05/6:52 PM
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I kind of had a feeling.
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