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The Buiness Card (Free verse) by abecedarian blue pin stripes
and a white collar
under velvet coat of black and ruby in the dark barlight
Tamp tie flung across and over
a practiced flick of the wrist
produce a card stock placard from his pocket
'wine importer and conniseur'
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Posted: August 23, 2007 8:52 PM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2007 8:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4092 Comments:
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richa @ 85.210.180.87
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24-Aug-07/1:24 PM
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I like the way the words sound. Does he have to be illiterate it seems a bit of a cheap jibe.
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http://mulberryfairy @ 207.5.159.9
> richa
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24-Aug-07/2:59 PM
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Does poor spelling make him illiterate? That is such a constrictive definition of the word. If so, half of our fellow poets are. I think this is a real character who is being fairly and poetically represented.-10
Duh, whassa Tamp tie ?
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