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The Buiness Card (Free verse) by abecedarian

blue pin stripes and a white collar under velvet coat of black and ruby in the dark barlight Tamp tie flung across and over a practiced flick of the wrist produce a card stock placard from his pocket 'wine importer and conniseur' __________ Character poem 1

richa 24-Aug-07/1:24 PM
I like the way the words sound. Does he have to be illiterate it seems a bit of a cheap jibe.




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