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For Elizabeth, Wherever She May Be (Lyric) by wilco
All dressed up like Sunday morning; yellow flower in your hair. Took a good long look at something, and decided you couldn’t take it anymore. Lately you’ve been feeling like me: scared and restless and bored with love. All broken up over nothing and maybe it’s got nothing to do with me. Elizabeth, I hope you’ve got sunny days wherever you are. Hung over like Sunday morning; still haven’t been to bed. I’ve been drinking so long for nothing, and decided this shouldn’t be a young man’s dream. Lately I’ve been feeling like hell: drunk and tired and bored with life. All broken up over something and maybe it’s got everything to do with you. Elizabeth, I hope you’ve got sunny days wherever you are.

Up the ladder: Construction Lot (edit)
Down the ladder: Jesus-f-ingChrist I'm Sober

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.625
Weighted score: 5.7059712
Overall Rank: 1933
Posted: February 17, 2005 7:36 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2005 7:36 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] deleted user @ 216.135.39.196 | 18-Feb-05/1:41 PM | Reply
Killer!!!
The Peekster
[8] Dovina @ 12.72.10.8 | 19-Feb-05/6:32 AM | Reply
No, I couldn't stay mad. It's a pretty good poem no matter how old you are. It had more to do with some unrelated baloney. I hope you’ve got sunny days wherever you are.
[10] zodiac @ 212.118.14.17 | 20-Feb-05/5:35 AM | Reply
This is good.
[n/a] wilco @ 24.165.207.93 > zodiac | 20-Feb-05/8:51 AM | Reply
I can't ever tell if you're serious or not. If you are, thanks.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.167 > wilco | 20-Feb-05/2:04 PM | Reply
Wilco this is a nice poem ..
[9] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 4-Nov-06/8:28 AM | Reply
Reads well, sounds better :-)
[n/a] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 > Ranger | 4-Nov-06/9:08 AM | Reply
Thanks. To be honest, I absolutely hate this song now. I'm not sure if I think it sucks r if I'm just tired of it at this point but I do...I really do.
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