Re: SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown	8-Apr-04/8:13 AM
What's all the DAMN YELLING in here?? My gawd.
Re: Martyrs in suburbia - (we wander like breezes) by zodiac	7-Apr-04/7:46 PM
Me wander? should be "I and Jesus and Joan..." and whats with martyr-dom? did you paste it from dictionary.com, by any chance?
Re: The Kings of Paradise by Spindle	7-Apr-04/7:18 PM
All too many "all"s ... zodiac, you're starting to scare me.
Re: a comment on Diary by wilco	7-Apr-04/7:53 AM
try pasting it into notepad first; I've been able to make indented poems without too much probs. Pretty much the only thing it won't let you do is bold, etc. (and indent the first line).
Re: A Quick Lick Of Yellow by Jeremi B. Handrinos	7-Apr-04/7:49 AM
I can appreciate the wordplay with the el sounds and the low sounds. Good consistent imagery; nice.
Re: The Pear Blossom Highway by Shardik	7-Apr-04/7:48 AM
Yep, thats a keeper.
Re: a comment on Poop! by dougsoderstrom	6-Apr-04/8:01 PM
he can't comment - he said he never would again. Sad, really.
Re: Cynical? by baughworm	6-Apr-04/7:57 PM
line break between that/they're is ungood.
Re: a comment on Hologram glasses by zodiac	6-Apr-04/7:51 PM
yeah... about that...
Re: Poop! by dougsoderstrom	6-Apr-04/11:49 AM
please. go someplace else with this crap.
Re: Hologram glasses by zodiac	5-Apr-04/2:13 PM
why didn't you just add a new poem instead of blowing this one away?
Re: Hologram glasses by zodiac	5-Apr-04/2:03 PM
I laughed, I cried. nice job.
Re: a comment on ode to summer dreams by jsd	3-Apr-04/4:16 AM
yeah, yeah - I know what you meant. (shame!) ;)
Re: a comment on Red Dress Wearing One Boot Cowboy by Lenore	2-Apr-04/9:30 PM
too "done"
Re: Red Dress Wearing One Boot Cowboy by Lenore	2-Apr-04/9:00 PM
agreed, good title.
Re: It Won't Last Long by Spindle	2-Apr-04/8:59 PM
Topical, I spose.
Re: Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme	2-Apr-04/8:53 PM
"green" once - certainly not three times. summer[']s
Re: Wartner by unouluvme	2-Apr-04/8:52 PM
That last bit has to go. And if you are going to offer up a rewrite, you should especially fix the spelling errors - there really is no good excuse for that.
Re: Shower by unouluvme	2-Apr-04/8:49 PM
a rewrite?
Re: Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom	2-Apr-04/8:47 PM
Why does this remind me of every song from 1976 to 1983?