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Shower (Free verse) by unouluvme
liquid trickling down
from my hair to my toes
droplets, following
curves, my breasts, hips,
thighs...desire for a
mans gentle touch,
wet hair, so warm,
slicked to my back,
drinking the water,
sweet, sweet to my mouth
my soap, white with kisses,
into the dark red washcloth,
smell so inviting,
lustfull and sweet,
suds down my whole body,
neck, arms, breasts,
hips, thighs, and quickly
my bottom.
rinsed fresh, perfectly seen,
pure tanned, slim, tall,
no virgin...but
clean.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4729
Posted: February 28, 2004 8:57 AM PST; Last modified: April 2, 2004 3:04 PM PST
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