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Picking Up Sins (Free verse) by BrandonW He doesn't have a name yet,
or a face that can be brought to life.
But he has already rooted a stronghold
in the soil of your mind.
Intertwined in my sheets you nourish
the existence of this phantasm.
I envy him, 'cause he will pick up sins
right where I left them.
You will pin his pictures
over empty corkboard spaces.
His body will warm the side of the bed
that I now occupy.
He doesn't have a name yet,
or a cock as big as mine.
But I'm sure his exaggerated image
will keep you moist.
It's only the thought that he exists
that keeps him alive.
Up the ladder:
Fellowship Of The Sun
Down the ladder:
No-Strings
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Posted: November 28, 2005 9:21 PM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2005 9:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.190725 Overall Rank: 4687 Comments:
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In writing: All the above but straight men will say and do the gayest things in the process of getting laid like dancing. If he was having sex in the poem and said cock that would be fine but he's just using the word like it's what he always calls it. Like "my cock itches". "I've got to go drain my cock" The more often you use it in common remarks the gayer it becomes.
Either it's that or the constant references made to "Him" in the poem followed by the use of the term "Cock" made it sound gay.
Ah hell! I don't know. It was a first impression anyway.
Here -9-
Now stop winking.