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He Kissed Me (Free verse) by PoeticXTC
Leaned in slowly
Til our lips met;
Anxious.
Our hearts racing, t'was night we won't forget.
A moment WELL over due
A feeling SO worth the wait;
Satisfied.
Your heart in my hands;
A tightly gripped fate.
This moment shouldn't end.
Lips, locked;
Perfection.
Once is never enough
Twice more our lips docked.
Reunited souls should again part;
Never.
Wanting this to last forever.
Compassion is endless
Our future is set
Our hearts still racing
T'was a night we'd never forget.
He kissed me softly
Hearts continued to beat,
Endless.
He kissed me forever
Til' again we'd meet.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4699
Posted: January 9, 2006 8:51 PM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2006 8:51 PM PST
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