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Shower (Free verse) by unouluvme

liquid trickling down from my hair to my toes droplets, following curves, my breasts, hips, thighs...desire for a mans gentle touch, wet hair, so warm, slicked to my back, drinking the water, sweet, sweet to my mouth my soap, white with kisses, into the dark red washcloth, smell so inviting, lustfull and sweet, suds down my whole body, neck, arms, breasts, hips, thighs, and quickly my bottom. rinsed fresh, perfectly seen, pure tanned, slim, tall, no virgin...but clean.

Shuushin 2-Apr-04/8:49 PM
a rewrite?




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