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Wartner (Free verse) by unouluvme
Poised atop my finger, steaming, cold, and frozen the calloused surface surrenders to the blue foam aplicater the warning on the label "could cause serious burns" scares me half to death. my beautiful finger scarred for life the most important one after all without this finger which one would flip the birdie? but the ugly wart so vile and unsightly annoyed me even more 15 seconds, the stinging pain but a good cause it was for 2 weeks passed, me waiting impatiantly it shrunk, died, passed away, my finger beautiful once more. *imagine me showing you* (remember, this is my middle finger were talking about):)

Up the ladder: Checkmate
Down the ladder: The Saddest Part

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5841
Posted: February 24, 2004 7:10 PM PST; Last modified: April 2, 2004 3:08 PM PST
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[10] zodiac @ 152.30.11.176 | 25-Feb-04/11:32 AM | Reply
Shatner.
[n/a] unouluvme @ 66.167.220.126 | 25-Feb-04/2:44 PM | Reply
i didnt really expect anuone to read/care about this... it was one of my "God, i am so bored right now, hummm...well, lets see what cool sites are on the internet..." poems. Haha. oh well...thanks for the comments!

[10] zodiac @ 152.30.44.208 | 25-Feb-04/6:10 PM | Reply
Crystal Lane Swift/lydia evelyn has posted 152 poems on this site. Only horus8 and INTRANSIT have posted more. Does anyone else find this REALLY UNSETTLING??!!?!?! I mean, WHAT THE HELL FOLKS???!??!?!?
[n/a] unouluvme @ 209.110.217.14 | 28-Feb-04/8:49 AM | Reply
feel free to give suggestions...i cant spell so youll have to ignore that part. Well, thanks for the comments!
[10] zodiac @ 67.240.192.135 > unouluvme | 28-Feb-04/9:20 AM | Reply
i cant give suggestions so youll have to ingroe tahht prat.
[7] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 2-Apr-04/7:55 PM | Reply
fashizzle my nizzle.
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 2-Apr-04/8:52 PM | Reply
That last bit has to go.

And if you are going to offer up a rewrite, you should especially fix the spelling errors - there really is no good excuse for that.
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