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SEASON OF WINTER

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Apr 2004 · 5 comments

SEASONS OF WINTER THOU HAVE COME NOW WITH CHAOS AND FREEZE WITH UNWEALTHY TREASURES OF SADNESS AND FOAM THOU ARE NOT AWARE OF THE HURT THAT THOU HAS BROUGHT FROM LAND UNKNOWN. SEASON OF WINTER THOU HAVE BROUGHT PAIN THOU CAN'T IMAGIN BUT MY TRUST FOR MY LOVE WILL NEVER FAID I WILL FOREVER STAND BY MY BELOVED FOR SEASONS TO COME.

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[4] anyone 8-Apr-04/6:18 AM Reply

Foam in winter? A couple of spelling errors.

[6] wilco 8-Apr-04/6:29 AM Reply

Yes, you need to fix the spelling errors, and I would not use "thou" so much (if at all).

[5] zodiac 8-Apr-04/7:48 AM Reply

I HAVE THE SAME PROBLEM - MY KEYBOARD ONLY HAS CAPITAL LETTERS.

[n/a] Shuushin 8-Apr-04/8:13 AM Reply

What's all the DAMN YELLING in here??

My gawd.

[7] deleted user 8-Apr-04/2:29 PM Reply

Use King James English consistantly or not at all. THOU HAVE COME NOW -> Thou comest now, for example.
Yet to stand by your love in the hard times is like getting through a hard winter - good thought.