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SEASON OF WINTER (Free verse) by galaxy4unknown

SEASONS OF WINTER THOU HAVE COME NOW WITH CHAOS AND FREEZE WITH UNWEALTHY TREASURES OF SADNESS AND FOAM THOU ARE NOT AWARE OF THE HURT THAT THOU HAS BROUGHT FROM LAND UNKNOWN. SEASON OF WINTER THOU HAVE BROUGHT PAIN THOU CAN'T IMAGIN BUT MY TRUST FOR MY LOVE WILL NEVER FAID I WILL FOREVER STAND BY MY BELOVED FOR SEASONS TO COME.

hypatia 8-Apr-04/2:29 PM
Use King James English consistantly or not at all. THOU HAVE COME NOW -> Thou comest now, for example.
Yet to stand by your love in the hard times is like getting through a hard winter - good thought.




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