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ode to summer dreams (Free verse) by jsd
a ticklish summer scheme
fitting so well with my eternal summer dream
of hot air eves with hands around my waist
a guitar nearby and dirt on my feet
and so many girlish wishes
carelessly spent on feeling complete
sun down, your town, keys turn, heat burns
wheels roll and i'm on my way to feeling whole
streetlights on, act upon, doors close, forget woes
a giddy embrace wrapped up in the arms of grace
under dusklit skies
entranced by golden eyes
nobody's out to buy your story,
nobody wants to hear your reasons why
just look above to the glory
and ahead, deep into july
keep your reasons close to your soul
and put a little love in this hole
...and those classified hours with you
we'd love to repeat
soaking in the music and everything you do
nights happily spent feeling complete
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5555553
Weighted score: 6.2777777
Overall Rank: 903
Posted: April 1, 2004 8:55 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 8:55 PM PST
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In many different ways,
However if it stays,
I will forfeit my lunch out of my bum before reaching a loo.