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Sand Snipe (Free verse) by madamefrufru
Gripe or grapple Sand Snipe.
Dredge and turn the shingle
To find the living.
Trawl the dimpsey lines
Losing vision, gaining lives.
Wait we will not Sand Snipe.
Future hunger
Keeps a larger larder.
project spray into our houses,
With floors that mirror minds to men.
Voiceless Waiting Sand Snipe.
Edible eyes you'll take.
And Churn,
Turning.
Over and again before the tides will sail.
Again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.75
Weighted score: 6.2774715
Overall Rank: 908
Posted: July 14, 2009 5:15 AM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2009 5:15 AM PDT
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