Re: B.F. by skaskowski	9-Oct-03/3:55 PM
Lai
Re: a comment on Why do you give yourself blue tens? by Bachus	9-Oct-03/11:01 AM
I can't, I pled the fifth. lol.
Re: Reptilian by Christof	9-Oct-03/10:59 AM
ha haa haa, you crack me up. brilliant ending my two notes would only be: "You bastard snake, again, and again." And a typo with comma correction in S1. 9.
Re: facku by J.B. Manning	9-Oct-03/10:55 AM
Do.
Re: a comment on A Countercultural Trip by peaceseeker	9-Oct-03/10:50 AM
Well then "dunse" is dunce. You're welcome.
Re: Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss by Y2kSlamPoet	9-Oct-03/9:30 AM
"the day children killed Jesus's great grandson." I would drop this line altogether, and end at the line before it.
Re: Never Love A Poet by Caducus	9-Oct-03/9:27 AM
Robert Johnson's "Phonograph blues". (That's what I was listening to while just reading this). How are you? I missed you.
Re: Primal Reality by peaceseeker	7-Oct-03/7:04 PM
my only critique would be it should be compressed by two. In other words each line should take on the line below it doubling each line but making the actual physical poem smaller by a half.
Re: The Swallower (Oh brother!) by Spanish Devil by Bachus	7-Oct-03/6:29 PM
The sheer genius is in the kneading of the dough. Yeah, so what if I'm into getting my nails done? it's better then using my teeth.
Re: a comment on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Oct-03/8:31 PM
You obviously haven't done your homework. I suggest you view my homepages or look me up on the Imdb.com. I sir, am a bonafide dandy, and quite the lady's man. I'm gentle, handsome, and highly sophisticated. I think you should call the FBI.
Re: The man, the world by INTRANSIT	3-Oct-03/12:51 PM
ahaaahhaahahahah, feezus that was ahoot. 9.
Re: a comment on The Western World by mrpresident	3-Oct-03/12:08 AM
I wish you were too.
Re: a rapid expenditure by skaskowski	2-Oct-03/12:02 PM
Surely.
Re: Desire by revy13	2-Oct-03/12:00 PM
The last time I smelled a Temptation? he spun around splashing lukewarm jerry curl juice upon my naked buttocks. Naturally, I instantly climaxed in a heap of off Navy blue jelly and fuzzy toenail clipping pearljam to suck my thumb and coo. LIKE A REAL MAN in an unreal world full of hate and 7 elevens. I'm so sad so so damn sad *sniffle*.
Re: time's concubine by skaskowski	2-Oct-03/11:48 AM
So-So. I've seen better from you.
Re: a comment on The Fucktory by horus8	2-Oct-03/11:11 AM
Woah, you've seen fear distrubuted? excellent, what a rare and majestic occurence for you to have witnessed. It what form was it packaged and passed out? Can, foam with saran wrap, or digitally remastered.
Re: a comment on The Fucktory by horus8	2-Oct-03/11:07 AM
Outstanding! Except, I'm not the guy in the story. It's a fictional piece about a nonfictional reality. See how that works? Because, what you don't know is that I actually am a black jewish dwarf lesbian with a prostetic face. Therefore, it would be impractical and foolish to say I was a bigot, a racist or, a gay poet, or even a Toyota Camry.
Re: a comment on Joshua by Bachus	2-Oct-03/11:00 AM
I personally agree with you. Except for the part with the old big screen tv 'action' there are wonderfull fantastic images happening there. It's just that you're English and not 'getting' it. See, in America, they do this weird thing late at night when every one's sleeping. They hype up our GREAT NATION with various tributes and handsaluting and gun salutes and flags and children and TORCHES that torch permanently. And trust me when I say it's fantastical to the MAX! the rest, be assured, you are absolutely accurate about.
Re: Wasted Words by ho_hum	27-Sep-03/12:30 PM
Except, the word of THE CRAFTY JESU!
Re: a comment on >~{In the Shadow of a Crooked Ceiling}~< by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	26-Sep-03/7:00 PM
I like that you,ve made this a Sonnet now!...? uhhh, Chud is an American movie from the eighties about monsters in the sewers, and Tron, well, Tron is Tron for christ sake? Put them together and there you have it.