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The Swallower (Oh brother!) by Spanish Devil

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2003 · Edited 3 Oct 2003 · 3 comments

You bite! You bite! From left to right You are not proud, you never fight Swallowing semen & smoking crack Are those footsteps up and down your back? Never see their faces because you're chewing on cock Just swallow the leader, believe this breeder, Arch with pep, do not use thyme Pork shoulder to pork shoulder, Pumping in time, your mouth, your soft puppy fur? I always knew you were a swallower. Bite my thong, chew my dong. An Italian Angel, but pure Hong Kong The papers say I'm hung donkey kong? Here's new news baby, I fucking am. (Your thoughts are MEDIOCRE and so is your puddle fish) I chewed your heart and rubber sole today with no common denominator or DEMOCRACY! "All I think about is me" Letting you get your wish I don't care about humility. I just want you biting me. Will you accept my last dollar or are you still claiming you're no swallower? Forget about my bitter cum. You know I'll let you gobble some that gentle stride looms over me When in your mouth I finally pee- keep your seat, it's soft, it's ace! everyone grins To get their taste. No need to flaunt No need for shame, because in the end You suck THE SAME. Your choice is rod and you'll beg for gel no tracheotomy for your conch shell or consequences you'll retell "For my diseased philosophy" When in your mouth I cum then pee. No slurries mate, we'll both sweat I even brought a safety net To catch you if you fall from me? When in your trap doth blast a Sea of sticky white complacency. Muscles taut with strained pasta paste Your mouth's a gape so please don't waste my load because you're mad at me? for letting my thick pud be your skeleton key Just thank the lord you've jaws of a snake And your Jacob's organ shan't forsake! So if you claim that I'm a follower? It's only because you are a swallower.

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[n/a] poetandknowit 3-Oct-03/9:36 PM Reply
Cutting edge.
[10] SupremeDreamer 3-Oct-03/11:09 PM Reply
ah horus, i fear i might be getting a tad soft

but, thankfully your always at attention with parody musicals..hrmm, there must always be carnivores to do vegan population controll, or a bell man with the most painful copper echos.

does my "im being gentle" mask suit me? or do i need to get more goddamn plaster and better molds?

as usual, your satire is a well crafted stand up session- 10.
[n/a] Bachus 7-Oct-03/6:29 PM Reply
The sheer genius is in the kneading of the dough. Yeah, so what if I'm into getting my nails done? it's better then using my teeth.